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Sleep Injection by mtrip82 Sleep Injection by mtrip82
I had fun with this one.
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Critique by frosticwalk frosticwalk/critique/106395783">Apr 23, 2009, 10:14:44 PM
sands of time....static grandfather clock...unmoving face...a ladder that goes neither here nor there-does it let you leave or bring you in?...nearly everything in this image tells me this is a landscape in which time has ceased to exist, even hough everything points to the fact that at some point, there was-in effect-time. lost time maybe? there's alot of static going on here, except in the clouds. the clouds shift from dark to light add a touch of energy to this work. the lighter portion at the base of the ladder would suggest that the ladder is a way out. the point of salvation...escape from timeless limbo. everything exists to remind you that time no longer exists...that's just what i see.
you've got a nice diagonal focal movement...shadow in sand to clock to face to ladder and clouds. the diagonal of the ladder and the horizon also add some interest to the pov. the editing looks neat and clean. the shadow also is neat and clean and in good form. the light source gets a bit mixed up though with the clock face being lit up like a christmas tree on the side that is cast in shadow. small detail...
good job and good luck with your new techniques:)
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Xerces Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
cool work! a nice idea as well as a nicely put together piece
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mtrip82 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)
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Xerces Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
you're welcome!
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NeoStockz Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Kool man 8-)

My only gripe is the ghostly face, I think something a little more photorealistic would integrate better.. Other than that, great mood :)

Conzz
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mtrip82 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
I was gonna leave the eyes hollow, which now I wish I would have, but yeah, I see what you mean. :)
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